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Thursday, 13 October 2016

The Mystery Person

The Mystery Person

One dark, spooky night, I was reading my book underneath my cosy blue blanket, everyone else was asleep. Then suddenly, I heard my door creaking and open, I kept hearing noises, mysterious voices.

Suddenly, I saw this creepy ghost looking person, It was wearing a dark black robes with rips at the bottom and it had no legs! Then I suddenly thought of Harry Potter, I kept thinking it is a Dementor and it was!

It came towards me and stared straight into my eyes. It then started sucking all the good memories out of my brain! I started feeling dizzy, and a little bit confused then suddenly, I fainted!

7 hours later……
I woke up yawned, stretched and made my bed.I twitched and suddenly remember what happened last night. I then looked around, checking to see if the Dementor was still there and it wasn’t. I guess it was just a bad nightmare!

By Bella

Monday, 10 October 2016

Improving comments

We have been learning how to improve comments by editing our own comments that people have posted on our blog and by checking the punctuation and by making sure it makes sense.I found it easy because it was easy to fix the in corrections or mistakes and i found it hard because it was really frustrating making the sentences better.