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Friday 16 November 2018

Camp Raglan was usual enough

Camp Raglan was usual enough
Camp Raglan was usual enough; it had
A gigantic hammock, A flying fox, A climbing wall
And a confidence course I never went on.
My group of friends and I
Did what most people did during camp,
Jumping up and down with enthusiasm like silly monkeys on trampolines,
Fall of the BMX, Being blindfolded while doing the not so scary Burma Trail,
Roast delicious marshmallows during the camp fire,
Stayed up late like we were pulling a all nighter,
doing everything enjoyable and enthusiastic.


This is a poem that I had written about the senior school camp that happened last week.
We had to follow a model called "the town was usual enough". Enjoy and please give
me some feedback. Blog you later !

4 comments:

  1. i like how you did that it is cool like my blog by hoani

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    1. haha yes it is and thank you so much !

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  2. Hi Bella! its me Ryleigh I like how you done your writing i love it

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    1. Hey Ryleigh,
      Thank you so much for commenting on my blog and giving me feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, once again thank you so much.
      Kind Regards,
      Bella.

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